User:Amrsandhu/Turban/Paramdeep1313 Peer Review

General info
Amrsandhu
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Amrsandhu/Turban - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Turban - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Amrsandhu you tried well to improve the lead section but the information is similar, which is already given in the article. You can select one section of article which need to improve and do not rewrite the same information just by changing the words.