User:Amulumudi/Navi Pillay/Literally Legally Blonde Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Amulumudi
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amulumudi/Navi_Pillay?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Navi Pillay

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead: Wow! This lead is very well written. It is extremely detailed giving a very broad overview of her life and career with many links. Good job!

Early Life and Education: Good job on putting a photograph in this section! I think it adds value. Very descriptive writing. I would add more citations in this section. Some paragraphs/sentences are missing citations. I also really like how you divided up Early Life and Education into subheadings of early life, college, etc.

Legal Career: I would maybe say "Private Practice" rather than at her own law firm. Good job on the writing and content. I would add more citations throughout. On the high court of South Africa, I would perhaps add some facts about the importance of the court in the legal landscape in South Africa. You have great specific information about her and the context of her being on the court, but I think some background information could be useful.

International Criminal Tribunal for Rwanda: I like how you divided up the Notable Cases with Subheadings--very well organized and easy to read. Again, add more citations behind every sentence/fact. I love these pictures that you have throughout the article.