User:Amusaed/Environmental racism/Lsibuc Peer Review

General info
Amusaed
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Amusaed/Environmental racism
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Environmental racism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer review

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? A new lead has been added to reflect new changes.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? yes, clear and informative. The edits are up to date and very clear.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? very relevant.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? yes.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? not that I can see.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? It does.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? yes.
 * Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? yes.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yes.
 * Are the sources current? yes.
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? yes.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? yes.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? not that I can see.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? I believe so, yes.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? more up to date references, situations, and events.