User:AmyRincor/Converse (lifestyle wear)/Momotones Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AmyRincor


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AmyRincor/Converse_%28lifestyle_wear%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Converse (lifestyle wear)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added seemed to be relevant and also interesting. The tone was completely neutral, as the content added did not have or need any specific tone to it. I do feel that the content added did focus a lot on the styles of converse, though I will say the original article did have decent information so there is not much more to add on top of that. The links to external websites were pretty recent, though some of the articles did not have any publish date. There was diversity in the sources and the content added was a good reflection of the articles. The image of the Converse x Stussy shoes were relevant and also looks to be an original photo. The visualization of the different styles I found was beneficial to the article and content. Granted, trying to work around the content added in the draft was a bit confusing for me, that is just the general draft. I think the content added is knowledgeable and doesn't hurt the original article at all. The part about added features and reasonings behind why were interesting and good to have in an article. If anything, the only change I would say would be to maybe expand on the content as much as possible and branch off into different parts of Converse. I also did find small spelling mistakes, like accidentally forgetting a letter at the end of a word.