User:Amy YDY/Lusheng/Lwang6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amy YDY


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Amy YDY/Lusheng


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lusheng

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi Amy, I think you overall did a good job improving the article. The first thing that I am considering is that I am wondering if you can add links on your references 1, 2, 4, and 5 so it could redirect the readers to the place they want to see the original source, if it is based on a journal, maybe search for a link to that journal? I hope my advice helps, and I think your sources are all reliable which is great.

Also, I think your wiki page is already good enough to publish, I just find another really successful wiki page that you can see as an example of wiki page instruments: the piano wiki page-- Piano.

For an instrument, maybe you could also add "mechanics, maintenance, playing and technique, and roles" in your wiki article if you are thinking about adding more content to your wiki page.

Overall, good work!