User:Amyapapayaaa/Urban renewal/Da Real sar Peer Review

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Amyapapayaaa
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Amyapapayaaa/Urban renewal :
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Urban renewal

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good article, and important topic!

I would add some minor, grammer adjustments to make it slightly more readable. For example, the sentence "Urban sprawl and urban renewal coexist within each just approach redevelopment differently." to "Urban sprawl and urban renewal coexist, each approaching redevelopment differently."

While the article does a good job on highlighting the cons from urban renewal, maybe also add the pros, and why governments decide to proceed with these project. This way both sides of the pros and cons of urban renewal are expressed.

Again good article.