User:Amyaris/Effects of pornography/Ageorgescu1698 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amyaris


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Amyaris/Effects of pornography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Effects of pornography

Evaluate the drafted changes
The drafted changes will add more content for various parts of the article. Those areas either lack extensive content or very little content. The sources are reliable. The draft is outlined clearly. There are other parts of the article that can use more content. However, the draft extends on the more serious affects of Pornography can have on an individual. Overall, you have a well written draft with supportive evidence, and plan to provide extensive and meaningful content.