User:Amycazares/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
The Kite Runner

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this page because I read the book and enjoyed it. My preliminary view of the wiki page was overall pretty positive as most of the sections were fairly fleshed out.

Evaluate the article
The lead is well written and discusses, in brief, most of the sections presented in the article. I think it would benefit from adding a brief sentence at the end explaining that the book drew controversy and was banned in many schools.

In the general content, almost all sections are given a lengthy description where no section seems to take precedence over the others. However, an area of improvement would be more fully flushing out the Part II section of the novel. It seems to have significantly less information than Part I and Part III. Similarly, there are three characters listed on the explanation page without explaining their relevance to the story.

For the tone and balance, the only qualms I have is to incorporate more direct perspective of Afghani people since their opinions seem to be under represented.

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