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Summary 1: "Prologue," "The River,"and "The Fire."
The writer in the book octavia butler and kinderd talks about her strange power she posses to get back in time where she meets her ancester in the age of 1815 in the southern plantation of marryland.The story starts by her appearence in the hospital where she finds herself lost her one arm.In the process of telling the police about the incidents, she atarts her story.

In the paragraph progue,the river and the fire she describes about her meeting to the buy rufus and his parents and the way she saved him from drowning in the river and her approach to her ancestor which have been slaved by the white people.Moreover, in the process she manages to escape from one of the patroller. She finds her way back home to her husband kevin and tries finding out the power to control this from happening. --An286 (talk) 19:35, 10 March 2014 (UTC)

Butler's Biography Assignments
Yes the lead section was understandable. The artical section is clear but the section "seed to harvest" in the artical section is not clear to me at all.we can actually delete that part of the artical.I find it unnecessary. The identidity of the person butler was missing like her personality like how see was as a person and how she was treated by the people around.her life story like the way she lived eg. she was not a person to drive. she used to use the bus and keep good conversation to the passenger there was how jolly and real and pure kind of person she was.i think this things should go in the section early life. There are section which are short about the life of her and carrer is short and the the aricals section are a bit longer than needed. I think the language of the artical are neutral enough. the sources are relaiable. I agree the external links contains a whole lot of a unnecessary things. i think it should be more precise and provided with only useful information needed about the auther and articals specificly. I dont see any broken lines oustside the website.An286 (talk) 20:15, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

Summary 2:"The Fall"
In the fall the story starts when kevin and dana meet at their same work place where kevin had just published a book and dana was in the starting phase of a writer.During this time kevin was at the week of leaving the job. kevin meets dana and starts to communicate with her and gets interested in knowing dana more. when dana and kevin were together at the room fixing books, kevin gets surprised by the dana's diappearence.however after hearing the story from dana about the time travel on dana, he gets more curious and starts reading more about the history on slavery.when all of sudden dana starts feeling dizzy kevin tries to hold her.This is when they both realize both travelled back in the time of rufus.Moreover rufus is found to be hurt and nigel would be the one beside him trying to help.This time rufus finds out kevin, who is a white guy belongs to dana who is a niger.An286 (talk) 23:55, 5 April 2014 (UTC)

Summary 3: "The Fight"
In the fight after dana gets back home for 8 days, she again gets pulled back in time where she finds rufus being beaten up by Isaac for trying raping his wife alice.Dana stop issac and helps rufus recover whereas alice and her husband Isaac runs away from that plantation.After they are back home Dana knows from rufus that kevin had moved to a different state whre rufus gives Dana the letter given by kevin.Dana recides to write letter to kevin and asks rufus to help her reach it to kevin.Moreover,alice and Isaac gets cought from running away.Isaac gets sold and alice is bought by rufus for himself to make his lover.Although alice was against it, she could fight it and gives in and stay with rufus.One day when alice finds some letters in rufus drawer and shows it to Dana.This is when she finds that rufus has been lying to dana and not sending her letter to kevin.Dana tries to run away in search of kevin.Unfortunetly dana gets cought by rufus and tom and gets whipped for running away.Rufus confess to dana about him not wanting dana leave him as a reason of not sending letter to kevin.However when tom finds about the truth of rufus lying to dana, he himself sends letter to kevin and calls kevin back.After when kevin is back, Dana tries to run away with kevin and Rufus gets furious, points the gun towards kevin and dana for not letting him know about them leaving.An286 (talk) 00:19, 6 April 2014 (UTC)

Summary 4:"The storm" "The rope" The epilogue"
In this chapter Dana and kevin both comes back to future.kevin looks and feels different about everything that happened to him back in time for five years.After few days Dana time travels again to marryland and finds rufus very drunk and lying face down in puddle.Dana stays with rufus and aids him back to the health.On the other hand tom weylin gets heart attack where dana couldnot save him.Rufus blames dana for his fathers death and unable to save him.Rufus send dana to work in the field however he is more harsher to alice than to dana which makes alice somehow jealous and hates the feeling.she asks dana to help her run away from there so that rufus wouldnot sell her second child hager after joe which infact is dana's ancestor.Hager is finally born.Rufus starts having feeling for dana, he always wants dana to stay by his side.He doenot like anyone talking to dana.He sells one of the slave for flirting with dana which upsets her.In the process of trying to stop him, he slaps her.She couldnot stand the behavior of rufus anymore and tries cutting her wrist.In the chapter rope dana finds herself in her apartment. she explains everthing to kevin about her ancestor hager being born.After fifteen days together with kevin she is again pulled back to time where she sees rufus for the last time mad and sad about alice killing herself for rufus lie about selling her child whereas in reality he had just sent his child to his aunt's place in Baltimore.He listens to dana about bringing them back and freeing them.Dana takes care of joe and hager.Rufus likes dana and finds her likes alice but she agnores him.rufus tries to rape dana this is when she gets scared and stabs him twice with knife.However she couldnot escape back to future completely as rufus would be holding her left arms.This is when she looses her left arm and is being hospitalized during the beginning of the book.An286 (talk) 02:04, 6 April 2014 (UTC)