User:AnNguyen1018/Wushan Man/Cornyon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AnNguyen1018


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AnNguyen1018/Wushan_Man?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wushan Man

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, it is clear that the user has continued to modify and better the existing article on the Wushan Man.

The language used is concise, readable, and the majority of it is well formatted.

Personally think the original structure in intro section was better because it begins by specifically addressing the Wushan man fossils and when they date. Then transitions to where they were found. In the user's sandbox, where the fossils were found is put in the middle of this. It is just a suggestion, but I believe reverting to the previous format is best for this.

The sources that the user cites and have added are diverse and from reliable sources. However, I think that if possible some even more recent sources would add to the article.

Overall, the user has completed revamped the article.