User:AnaMaco/BunkFest/Laurensirianni Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AnaMaco


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AnaMaco/BunkFest?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * BunkFest
 * Evaluate the drafted changes

Lead: Lead was a little weak. Maybe add one more sentence beforehand to really grab the reader's attention.

References: I noticed that you pulled three different subtitles from one article for all three of your references. Maybe add another one from a different credible source to really show that you there are more than just one credible source out there for this subject

Impressions: I felt that this was very informative and I learned alot about a subject I knew very little about prior. I felt that you organized your information well and remained neutral when delivering facts. Keep up the great work and best of luck!