User:AnaMaco/BunkFest/Sssnyder1596 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AnaMaco


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:AnaMaco/BunkFest - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * BunkFest - Wikipedia
 * BunkFest - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
In your draft, you do not have a lead section. I suggest that you add one. In your lead section it can just be a quick sentence or two mentioning what you had described in your added sections to make sure it is brief addressed in the introduction of your Wikipedia article. Your content seems to be very informative, up to date, and in line with the content of your article. Your addition is well balanced and has a very neutral tone to it. One other thing I would suggest doing is working on your structure, so you do not have a bunch of lone sentences. Overall, I think this is very good.