User:Anabellakb/L.A. Burdick/Nustudent1120 Peer Review

Hi @ Anabellakb ! As a frequent customer of L.A. Burdick, I was so happy to see that this was your contribution for Wikipedia. I'm reading the article after Noah made edits and it looks fantastic! I think it gives a great general overview of the shop's history, its chocolatiers and its locations. I made fairly minimal edits to the piece as I didn't want to edit just for the sake of changing something. I added a couple links to other articles and a source here or there but overall this was a great piece to read.

The one thing I wish the article included is what their offerings are besides chocolate! I know most cafes change their menus frequently which makes it hard to keep an article on Wikipedia up to date but I think having a list with their typical offerings would be helpful. I know they have croissants, cookies, assorted pastries, tea, coffee and hot chocolate. This may just help better contextualize their offerings for readers! Nustudent1120 (talk) 15:22, 13 April 2023 (UTC)