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I'm looking forward to the rest of it. Dr. Bricker

"Article Evaluation"
I did mine on the Orphanage.

Is everything relevant to the article topic? Yes

Is there anything that distracted me? Too many numbers.

Is any information out of date? I am not sure, I'm sure with a subject like this many things are changing.

Is the article neutral? I believe so.

Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? Not that I have read.

I have no idea if I did this right. Hope this is it.

"Assigned Article: John Locke."
One of the aspects I will be changing in my assignment will be John Locke's 'religious background'. I am going to separate it out a bit to make it more understanding about his religious thoughts. g

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Edits

 * Removing quotes and specific evidence since Wikipedia doesn't allow that.
 * Clarifying his religious beliefs and rewriting them in a way people understand.
 * Adding more evidence to Locke's Philosophy
 * Locke, John. An Essay Concerning Human Understanding. W. Tegg,1870.
 * Rogers, G.A. J. Locke's Philosophy: Content and Context. Clarendon Press, 2007.

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