User:Anabishop99/Organ pipe coral/Bridget Fountain Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anabishop99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Organ pipe coral
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading the rough draft of your article on the Organ Pipe Coral, you have gotten off to a really solid start! Your opening paragraph has a lot of great information in it. You have a great description of the species including it's makeup, colors, features, etc.

A suggestion I have would be to split up that paragraph a little in order to elaborate more on certain topics. After your description of the animal, you can make a subject heading of "Distribution" and talk about where it's located most and all about the colonies they can create, and life that lives around them. You can also make a "Habitat" heading to talk about how it lives in shallow waters, but has also be found in aquariums as well. Splitting up some of the information will help the reader navigate your article better!

I see you have a great 3 sources to refer to in your article which is a great start. These are really solid sources, so continue to find a few more so you can create some more content for the page!

Overall, you have a perfect start to this article about the Organ Pipe Coral. Keep on going!