User:Analyticace/Peer Review

General info
Greer365 and MckinleyGray
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Greer365/James V. Neel
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):James V. Neel

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is about a geneticist James Van Neel and his work and role in the development of the human genetics field.

There hasn’t been any edits made by Greer365 other than transferring the article to the sandbox. MckinelyGray has made two edits. I find their edits to be useful and of importance. This further explains how he obtained some of his knowledge, and she adds in acronyms for some important organizations.

I’m not sure if any edits were made outside of wikipedia, but a few more details to show how he helped to develop his studies would help to improve the article. A few more reliable sources would also improve the article to support the stated facts. The citations all work, however they are not all neutral as some seem to favor James Neel.