User:Anamhye/Q fever/Court2020 Peer Review

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Anamhye
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 * User:Anamhye/Q fever
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 * Q fever:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Quick thoughts:

- Is there a source for [2] under references?- What source was used for "Other contributing risk factors are as follows: geography, age, and occupation exposure. In regards to geography, Q fever is more common in livestock farming regions in the United States, particularly the West and the Great Plains. Notably, California, Texas, and Iowa account for almost 40% of reported cases. The disease follows seasonal trends, with cases more likely to occur during the spring and early summer, when most livestock are breeding. This is true whether the disease is acute or chronic." in the 3rd paragraph?

Critique:

This article is very well written and is full of interesting epidemiological information! I pointed out one part where I did not see a linked source and one spot where the reference was missing in the bibliograpghy, but overall there is great use of intext citation and links to other wikipages. For organization, I may recommend splitting the information up into specific epidimiological subsections, such as "Prevalence and Incidence," "Diagnosis," Descriptive Epidemiology," etc. This may strengthen the comprehension when switching between topics. The content is neutral and easy to read.

Great job! Keep it up!