User:Anamhye/Q fever/MadelineMartin7302 Peer Review

General info
Anamhye
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing User:Anamhye/Q fever:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Q fever:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good start! Is the sandbox ideas from the group so far or is it off the Wiki page?

Maybe add the titles that subjects fall under into your sandbox? It was a little hard to follow in the sand box

Maybe making the separation on how Q fever is transmitted and adding more detail if it's important?

Will images be incorporated into the sandbox and then final product? Specifically any maps that are from the general geographic regions Q fever is prevalent in?

Great job with the citations!

Maybe link serologic methods, doxycycline, and hydroxychloroquine because it is its own concept or drug, (it doesn't need a citation, but to understand more detail and give the backing to those specific concepts).

Is there going to be further information for proper public health education can decrease the number of cases. What public health education incentives are going to be beneficial for Q fever? Have specific places already done this? What has the outcome (positive or negative) been from proper public health education?