User:Anamhye/Q fever/Moose002 Peer Review

General info
Anamhye
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Anamhye/Q fever - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Q fever - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article does a great job of explaining the causes, what groups are susceptible, and risk factors. There are lots of great citations that are referenced in the article as well. I noticed your article briefly mentions prevalence of Q fever around the world which I found helpful to learn about in addition to statistics from the United States. I would consider adding what year some of the statistics are from as some of them are older. I would expand on the last sentence a little more explain how a good public health education would prevent Q fever cases. You could have some subheadings instead of topic sentences for each section because they can be wordy. Overall, I was very impressed with the information you provided. Great job!