User:Anan lyz/UI Designer/Toaddoesnot Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anan Iyz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anan%20lyz/UI_Designer?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * UI Designer

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would like to start by saying that I have a slight concern about the existence of this article because usually, Wikipedia addresses a field rather than a career, so the information presented might fall into the User interface page. Regardless, I think that your draft have a clear good start and a bunch of very useful information that have a lot of potential.

I really like the number of details that are put in the career overview and that you have separated it from the introduction, which are often mistakenly mixed. The categories, aspects, and steps are also very useful because they create a sense of structure that aligns well with encyclopedia-style. Another great addition is anchoring to other articles like graphic design, interaction design, and tree structure: it massively improves the understanding of the context. In the career development section, I would possibly add the types of employment such as being a full-time professional, working with a short-term contract on the project, and doing freelance. Maybe it can also have a hiring process such as an overview of the portfolio, education, and cases, as well as other branches of promotion and horizontal development.

I would be more cautious with some world-choices such as “of course”, “needs to”, and “therefore”, as I am afraid that they add to the research and personal opinion and contradict a neutrality principle of the Wikipedia. I would also suggest adding more sources and citations because it is unclear where most of the information came from: I think that on Wikipedia, it is a good idea to add a source after every sentence or add at least two sources at the end of the long passage.