User:Anastaciam/Black women/Destinyg99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anastaciam


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Black women, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anastaciam/Black_women?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Black women

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above are it is relevant. Consider the guiding quetions, and check the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead is good. Anastacia is talking about black women in music and in media in general. She talked about Normani and Summer Walker's accomplishments.

The content is very interesting and definitely up to date. Not only did Anastacia add something new. It is important, especially during this generation, because media/music is very important to this generation today and black women's accomplishments are not really out there like that. I appreciate Anastacia for bringing light to this topic.

Tone and Balance I feel like there is no bias here with everything she has added to the article, it has been backed up by sources.

Sources and References - everything in the article seems up to date and the links do work on my end. She does include history when she talks about a celebrity such as their birthday and their accomplishments in this profession.

Organization - I like how it is formatted. I think it is organized that way, but there are a few grammatical errors. With past tense and present tense words. Some commas need to be added. Overall, the subsections are easy to understand.

Images and Media- The images are perfect! The captions as well. I think they follow Wikipedia's regulations. Check the module to double check this.

Overall Impressions - I love this section and I think this brings light to the article because it talks about accomplishments that are not often talked about. It also brings something new and very relevant to today's time. I also really like the images and captions under the picture that have been put in the article that definitely adds more to the article. My only comment on this can be improved is just a few grammar mistakes. Other than that I really loved what you did. GOOD JOB!!

** Missing your Bibliography section on Wikipedia, don't forget to do that.