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Bibliography Notes

 * Violence and Maltreatment in Intimate Relationships- textbook
 * "The emotional maltreatment of children in domestically violent homes: Identifying gaps in education and addressing common misconceptions: The risk of harm to children in domestically violent homes mandates a well-coordinated response"

Notes on "Effects of Domestic Violence on Children"
-changed the first sentence in the lead to make it more clear and to the point; removed the part about the effects being a result of children seeing one parent abuse another because it can happen in any type of intimate relationships (siblings, or maybe children have witnessed domestic violence in a different household seeing others engage in it)

-The statement about the Philippines seems irrelevant, especially since it is in the lead, and none of the rest of the article discusses it in further detail.

-Many citations needed--look up sources to back up what paragraphs don't have citations