User:Ancicco/Elizabeth O. King/Kirklandcb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kirklandcb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Elizabeth O. King


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Elizabeth O. King

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very well structured article. The tone of the article is neutral and your provided plenty of information. The organization was done well and the article flows nicely. I suggest maybe adding some links to further readings so readers have more information available.