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Article Evaluation
The article on Francis Bebey does not have a lot of information on it. The way that some sentences are structured make it sound repetitive. The article is lacking with its word choice, but it is easy to understand. It seems like the writer/writers did not expand their research wide enough because of their lack in information. They also split the article in to many sections, yet each section is very small and could be paired with other paragraphs. Regardless of these negative factors, it does seem to stay neutral and only contain non biased statements. When I look at the history of the page, it seems that every edit made was simple grammatical errors. Overall, I would not trust this article for true information about Francis Bebey.

Article Contribution
I plan to do more research on who Francis Bebey's real children are. I want to expand his work section and reword some of the sentences in there. I will reword the first sentence because it sounds repetitive. I would also like to find any new information on Francis Bebey that was not listed, so I can thicken the article. There is a date missing for Le Roi Albert d'Effidi, so I will find and add the date. There are a few spots where the article does not explain itself well, so I will add more explanations and finish up with fixing grammatical errors.

Edits:

Completed everything in my contribution

Fixed some grammatical issues

Added in some more citations

Added better explanations

Added more awards that were not noted