User:Ander0056/Ezell Blair Jr./Augustana-student-editor Peer Review

Hey! I want to say overall fantastic contribution. I felt you guys were all extremely in-depth and well organized. The early-life section is extremely well written, and thought-out. Overall the Early-life and education I believe are the best, and most comprehensive review of the literature, and impact he made with the Woolworth sit-in. You guys did an incredible job on that section as well as the legacy section. The legacy section offers a compelling glimpse into the post-activism life of Ezell Blair Jr., presenting a nuanced portrayal of his personal and professional endeavors. In my opinion just need to add a few clarification points, and citations towards the statements made otherwise solid paragraph. My biggest problem is concerning the personal life section there isn't much within it, and I feel it can be added to the later life, or legacy section. I think if you could find more information for it, and write some intresting facts maybe about his life after it would be quite interesting. The bibliography is quite solid as well no necessary changes need to be made and backed by academic sources. I found most of the links to be working well, and all information appeared reliable, and within a neutral point of view. Just keep focusing on grammer/puncuation, but otherwise spelling is on point, and sentence structure is fantastic! Overall great job, and keep up the great work!

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