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Article Evaluation :


 * All of the articles referenced within my article, "Golden rule (law)" supported the article topic.
 * The court cases that were used to support the article were dated back to the 1800's. In this case, improvement of this article would possibly be to include contemporary court cases that utilize the Golden Rule.
 * For the first hyperlinked noted it resulted in a dead end, showing no existence of the page reference. However, as for the three other each was cited correctly and lead to articles that supported and provided much more evidence.
 * The article is rated as a Start-Class based on the project's quality scale and low important on the project's importance scale.

Article Selection :

Religion & Capital Punishment - Religion and capital punishment


 * An area of improvement for this article would to revise the lead section so it adequately summarizes key points of content.
 * I would also condense or remove lengthy quotations from the article.

Freedom of Religion - Freedom of religion


 * This article room for improvement is needed in the subsection labeled India ; It has little to none references and is based on solely on individual research.

Freedom of Religion In Canada - Freedom of religion in Canada


 * This article contains many forms of irrelevancies to the overall question of Freedom of Religion in Canada, referencing points that are inconsistent with the neutrality rule of Wikipedia guidelines of what a solid article would be.

Internalized racism - Was the subject I edited on.


 * Furthermore, examining the social implications and its effect specifically on the African American community we see that for young black girls the portrayal of females go beyond sexual objectification and reflect a battle of stereotypical notions. These young girls combat the depiction of being only one type : an angry black woman who is obnoxious,ignorant, confrontational and loud at that.[ Not only do they struggle with internalizing these fixed notions of who they are, the definitions of beauty for African American girls are held up against a fallacious standard of what beauty should be. Film and Social Media in itself reflect beauty to be features that closely resemble Eurocentric features, such features that are nearly impossible to attain for a Black girl, let  alone any young girl.[ With this in mind we more often than not see the occupational roles of Blacks depicted in movies as athletes, servants, musicians, criminals,etc all of which hold a lesser value when compared to the leading roles of whites.[ The social implications in regards to the dynamic of role play within films become most problematic as young African American children internalize these fixed limitations and allow it to manifest their reality.

Despite the lack of adequate research linking music videos to negative self perception by young girls, research has shown adolescents have a higher susceptibility rate than other age brackets. More importantly, music videos are one of the many significant mediums that perpetuate sexual objectification of females, in return negatively making young girls question their purpose as beings. The perpetuation of females being nothing more than seductive “creatures” to men can presumably  leads to young girls internalizing their self worth as nothing more than objects.