User:Andikaylynn

Good Articles vs. Needs Improvement
Kingdom of Norway (872-1397)
 * has a banner listing things that need to be looked at
 * additional citations
 * original research
 * in-text citations are missing


 * recent revisions focused on making the content more accurate and adding citations
 * compared to good articles, this one is not organized very well and the headings could be better
 * it has a story-telling tone to some of the information
 * some of the sections need more information
 * many of the sections are just bulleted lists instead of informative content

Severe Weather Andikaylynn (talk) 19:19, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
 * On the talk page, people discussed issues with the structure of the article, the focus of the article, adding references, topics that should be removed, and a lot of discussion on the thunderstorm section
 * The most recent revisions were based on tagging sources
 * I think there has been some good progress made, but I think the organization of the content could still be improved
 * Some of the information is contradictory to the definition provided for what qualifies severe weather
 * The explanation for what causes severe weather does not consider weather not associated with thunderstorms

Article Revision Proposals
Martha Graham

Kingdom of Norway (872-1397)

Bob Fosse

Andikaylynn (talk) 06:34, 22 February 2018 (UTC)