User:Andrea.lizbeth99/Sex in advertising/Madss26 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Andrea.lizbeth99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex in advertising
 * Sex in advertising

Evaluate the drafted changes
There was no draft in the sand box to review but I think parts of the article could use more detail. The Criticism section could use some more detail as well as gender roles. Overall I think the article its self is good just could use some more research.