User:Andreamendozaa/Antonia Tarrago/Calenjanesky Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

andreamendozaa and Alexflores1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Andreamendozaa/Antonia Tarrago
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: I think that your opening section of "Early Years" could be more elaborate. I know that there might not be a lot of information on your person, but I think that you could make your opening section longer. If you do not have more information, I would suggest maybe talking about her early years, personal life, and the impact she had in her career?

Content: I think that your content is very good and talks about exactly what we are meant to be talking about with this project. In addition, I do not think that you overrepresent one view, as it seems pretty straightforward. Nice job!

Sources: the two sources you cited works, but I think that the links above the two citations do not work. Did you want to cite them or just list them as extra sources?

Organization: I think that it is organize very well and is very concise, which is good. One spelling error, I think you spelled feminist as "femenist" in the first sentence under "Early years". Other than that, everything seems good and organized.

Images and media: You don't have any images right now, but because your person died in 1916, I would be surprised if you could find any. If you can, it might help the article, but I don't think that it is bad without any images.

Overall impressions: I think you did a really good job! The article tells a lot about what she did, which I had no idea about before reading it. I think that if you can find more information on her personal life, that could be helpful. In addition, if you could link other Wikipedia articles to your page, so that people could learn more, that would be a nice touch. (possibly about Miguel Luis Amunátegui or The decree of Amunátegui?) Overall, good job!