User:Andreamendozaa/Antonia Tarrago/Isabellahinds Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Andreamendozaa & Alexflores1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Andreamendozaa/Antonia Tarrago


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Andreamendozaa/Antonia Tarrago

Evaluate the drafted changes
Antonia Tarrago seems like she had such an inspiring life and career! I noticed that you kept a neutral tone throughout the entire piece and organized the content in a way that flows well. Each section could definitely be expanded upon, and I would recommend adding a separate subsection for your person's death. It may also be useful to distinguish the things that made her efforts stand out in comparison to others' at the time, or perhaps to include more details about her childhood, early education, personal life, and/or family. Lastly, I found a few grammatical and spelling errors in your piece, but I'm sure those will be easy to fix! Overall, I think this is a great start, and I'm excited to read it once it is completed!!