User:Andrew-Hartman-1/Federalist No. 6/SJFlood29 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Andrew-Hartman-1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Andrew-Hartman-1/Federalist No. 6


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Federalist No. 6

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The first paragraph of this article is a good lead for the rest of your piece. From reading this paragraph, I get a basic overview of what I will be reading about. Moving forward just continue to add more to the lead.

Content:

The content that is present so far is good. I can tell you are still in the rough draft phases and that is perfectly okay. If you are looking to add more detail consider adding a section on how we as a modern society interpret this document in our government today, while remaining neutral.

Tone and Balance:

The tone and balance of this piece does remain neutral throughout the whole document. Make sure to stay this way as you finish up your article.

Sources and References:

Consider adding more sources to this document. There is a lot of analysis that has been done on these papers which may help you add more information to your piece. I recommend making your first and second sources have links in them for quick and easy access to the general public to see your sources.

Organization:

There is good flow within your Sandbox so far. It is good how you present arguments and counter arguments. My suggestion is to continue to add more to the piece and add in the citations with the hyperlinked words to other Wikipedia articles.

Images and Media:

There is no image that is present in your sandbox yet. When I looked at the original article of this Federalist Paper, it just has a picture of Alexander Hamilton. A recommendation I have to add more detail is to add a picture of this particular Federalist Paper as this would make the overall article have a more primary source view.

Overall Impression:

This article has a good start so far. You present a good viewpoint of this document. Moving forward, make sure to add more detail, add one or two more sections to your piece, and add in the citations and proper links.