User:Andrew32198/2002 Mombasa attacks/EricDaughtry22 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Andrew32198
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: 2002 Mombasa attacks

Lead evaluation
The lead to the article is clear, concise, and efficiently sums up the article in an easy way to understand. Your contributions to the lead are good as well. If you haven't already, add a citation for the content you added.

Content evaluation:
The already existing content and the content that you added are great. It was factual and statistical, interesting and related to the article and ties back to the lead.

Tone and balance evaluation
Tone sounds neutral to me. Does not seem bias, just factual. If possible maybe find more information about Al-Qaeda so that it is not under-represented.

Sources and references evaluation
I don't know if there is any new information that is more recent or "current" but if you could add some that would be really impressive. The few links I clicked on still work and are active, let's not forget to check them all just in case they don't.

Organization evaluation
Content is clear, concise and easy to read. That even includes the content you added. The organization seems well also, sections for all the important topics.

Images and media evaluation
The images and media seem suffice. If anything maybe add an image of the hotel if there are any available.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation
Overall I think that your contributions to the article most definitely were great. From the lead to the content everything ties and relates to each other. Nothing really seems over nor under represented. My only real suggestion would be to add more media just because and to not forget to cite your information.

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