User:AndrewEJohn

Andrew E John - Record of Edits:

20131221-0021 "Polylactic acid", (Readability) Section: Applications, Par 2, Sen 2: Changed first use of "within" to "inside". was: Depending on the exact type used, it breaks down within the body within 6 months to 2 years. now: Depending on the exact type used, it breaks down inside the body within 6 months to 2 years.

20130721-0203 "Chelyabinsk meteor", (Clarification - Added "(°C)" to 3rd Para, Last Sentence. Was - "...authorities scrambled to help repair the structures in sub-zero temperatures." Now - "...authorities scrambled to help repair the structures in sub-zero (°C) temperatures.")

20130605-1436 "Rosacea", added comma to separate subjects "ears" and "neck", in Par beginning: "Erythematotelangiectatic rosacea:", was: "...symptoms can also appear on the ears<> neck, chest, upper back, and scalp."

20130605-1428 "Ruminant", changed "and" to "as", in Par beginning "The cud is then regurgitated and chewed...", was: "...in these chambers by microbes (mostly bacteria well as some protozoa, fungi and yeast)."

20130601-0434, "Don McLean", removed double word "written", in Par beginning "Another hit song associated with McLean...", was: "...claimed by Lori Lieberman to have been written about McLean..."

20130514-0109, "Vernalization", removed double use of "to", in Par beginning: "For many perennial plants, such as fruit tree species...", was: "...a period of cold is needed  first to induce dormancy and then later..." 20130417-0607, "Sailing Ship", in Par beginning: "In 2006, automated control was taken..." corrected "feature" to future in 2nd Sentence, was: "...as a propulsion alternative for commercial ships to handle a possible feature energy crisis. "