User:AndrewRow1/Mutansucrase/Ggwarner Peer Review

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AndrewRow1, CSMicro4054, Thomasturner1, DyeMeg
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the "Lead" could be shortened/simplified into one sentence, just more brief in the detail it gives. I think it would be better to bring some of the information up later on in the article. Streptococcus mutans should be italicized (it is italicized 2/4 times). I think the first sentence of the "Formation of Dental Carries" section is a little unclear. I would either reword it or reorganize that section. The chemistry section could be elaborated on. Other than that, I thought it was very thorough and the sources were great. Good work!