User:Andrewsaillant/Squat lobster/Abrahard Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

zhulander


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Squat lobster
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Squat lobster

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Great job with the edits on the Ecology and Behavior section. The information added enhances the present details on distribution while maintaining a tone of neutrality. The seamount section and the recent study from March 2022 is very relevant and newer discoveries that provide more insight on oceanic squat lobster distribution. Citations are properly added and formatted.

Under Benthic Aggregation, there are two sentences starting with "As such, many species of benthic squat lobsters aggregate..." which do not have a direct citation; however, both of these lines point specifically to information obtained from a source. It may be helpful to add a citation here even if it's used elsewhere in the paragraph to be clear.

Seamount section- what are rise and ridge habitats? This might need a bit of explanation for a reader who does not know the terminology.

Ontogenetic Migrations and Pelagic migration- the information about the new study on squat lobsters was very interesting, maybe could have a better transition from the previous information, because it feelslike an abrupt switch.