User:Andrewsaillant/Squat lobster/Austin.park36 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gracegjerde


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Andrewsaillant/Squat_lobster?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Squat lobster

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the content added was good in that it was concise and used scientific/technical language. It also added important and much needed information about squat lobster's classification. The text was presented in a very neutral tone and did not seem to have any bias towards anything. The strength of the content added is that it gives more background information about the squat lobster's family and origin. I also noticed that some of the original sentences were altered in a way that paralleled and flowed better with the new material added. One suggestion/aspect that I would double check is if "galatheoid" needs to be capitalized or not (when talking about the fossil squat lobsters). Other than that, I liked how the information was to-the-point and helps readers with the background of squat lobsters.