User:Andrewvannice/Parthenocissus tricuspidata/GV184 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Andrewvannice)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Andrewvannice/Parthenocissus_tricuspidata?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Andrewvannice/Parthenocissus_tricuspidata?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

description is very detailed and easy to understand!

Update the part on calcium carbonate if it is a different substance.

Everything else is good let me know if you have any questions.