User:Andyqn29/Mindan/Bibliography

You will be compiling your bibliography and creating an outline of the changes you will make in this sandbox.

Outline of proposed changes
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All current sections of the article could be expanded on, so I will try my best to elaborate on each section at least a bit. I will be mainly focusing on the History and Activities sections, however, since those two areas are what most of my sources cover.

One of my sources covers two of the sister organizations listed in the Affiliates section, so I plan to briefly discuss what I found in that source at the beginning of this section.

After reading through all of my sources, I noted that many of them talk about Mindan in comparison to Chongryon, or how the two organizations have interacted over time. Therefore, I think I would be useful if a new section called "Relations with Chongryon" was established to more deeply dive into this sub-topic.

Finally, while the introduction to the article is adequate, it could use some work to make it more comprehensive. As such, I plan to add a few sentences to this opening part of the article to tie everything together more nicely.

As a side note, I noticed a few grammatical errors when reading through the unimproved version of the article, so I will be going in and fixing those as well.