User:Aneluhh/Gender bias in medical diagnosis/Klrgmclass Peer Review

General info
User:Lucialava
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://docs.google.com/document/d/15akbnxfEKhNHFdhlcaKfdwphl1Ts3h1nhD9HVrvS0pc/edit?usp=sharing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender bias in medical diagnosis
 * Gender bias in medical diagnosis

Evaluate the drafted changes
I primarily put my edits on the document but I think the actual content of the research is fantastic. The additions are recent and relevant; I found they added a lot of depth to the subject being covered. My main edits were to add more hyperlinks to other Wiki pages. I feel like those linkouts better help to engage with content relevant to the subject. I also added a few grammar things, but overall, I was really impressed by what I read.