User:Aneluhh/Gender bias in medical diagnosis/NiranunP Peer Review

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I think the drafting overall is really well done. There's a lot of information that I definitely felt was useful to add to the article, so the overall quality of the article is definitely improved. I did note in a couple of spots that some of the data that was used seemed to be individual studies and not peer reviews or book chapters, but I wasn't sure if that was necessary to change for the wiki page. I wanted to note that I tried clicking some of the links in the comments on the google doc and some of them didn't work, so just flagging that for y'all. There's also a couple of places where I thought the writing could be more concise, but I feel like the information is already there. Y'all do a good job focusing specifically on women's pain and treatment in medicine.