User:Anemic Walrus/Jessie Anthony/Student19877 Peer Review

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Anemic Walrus
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anemic%20Walrus/Jessie_Anthony?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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Notes for the Lead section:

If possible you should add some more information to this section. The information you currently have is important and great, but it may be a good idea to introduce the topics you will be covering throughout your article (career, personal life, etc.). Also some important information you could add would be when Jessie was born.

Notes for Career section:

I think maybe the information about her schooling could be put into a "early life" section as it is not really her career. The information in the second paragraph is really good and interesting. The only thing I would think about changing if I were you is putting the information about the award in a different section titled something like "awards." This would break up the information and make the page more organized and balanced, I think. The last thing I wanted to mention is that when you mention films for the first time the year of release is usually put in parenthesis beside the title. The film titles should also be italicized, though I see you have linked them which is great (I'm not sure if it is possible to italicize and link at the same time but you could check if you wanted to).

Notes for Personal Life section:

If possible, you should add some information about Anthony's family, upbringing, schooling, if she has a spouse, kids, etc. That being said, I'm sure a lot of that information is not accessible and that you have already tried to find it and there probably just wasn't many resources about these kinds of things.

Notes for Filmography section:

I really like the way you created this section. The tables make the information look really organized and it has all the information that is relevant. Maybe you could organize the information about the music videos she has produced in the same way.

Overall, I think this article is really great and interesting. I think it could be made better by organizing the information into more sections, which could also make the information flow better/more logically. If possible, I think more information about Anthony's personal/early life could be added.