User:Angb2015/Autism therapies/Delaney555 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Angb2015


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Blazer00/Causes_of_autism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Autism therapies

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I believe their lead is strong and gives a good summary of autism while also leading into their subject of autism therapies. I believe their lead is concise as well. I believe that the content is relevant and comes from credible sources. I do think that they could expand a little on what the different therapies are that they mention in their section. This author did not add in photos yet. I believe what they have started drafting is good so far, but could be a little more detailed. They have enough sources which is good. I did find maybe some minor grammar errors. Lastly, I think they stayed neutral which is important when posting on wikipedia.

{ I enjoyed reading your critiques and please know that I have considered all of them! I read through my draft and made sure to fix any grammatical errors that may have been overlook!}