User:Angeearnold/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Judaism

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I choose this article as it pertains to the course I am taking (Zionism and the Roads Not Taken).

Evaluate the article
I found this article to be full of important information. However, I found that the article included examples of differences in how conservative Jews practice versus reform Jews. That being said, I think the article is trying to give readers too much information. Trying to create a perfect article on Judaism is impossible, however I think sticking straight to the point with definitions might help readers better understand an all encompassing article on Judaism. Additionally, the writers seem to skip over the history of persecution of Jews, which I feel like is more important than trying to convey the nitty gritty definitions of the three main forms of Judaism. It would be important to include information on how the persecution ignited some movements within Judaism. Overall, the article is filled with sources and mostly indisputable information on Judaism.