User:AngelOffley/Mindfulness-based stress reduction/Makylam18 Peer Review

General info
Angel- @AngelOffley
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:AngelOffley/Mindfulness-based stress reduction

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

 * Mindfulness-based stress reduction

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is not a substantial amount of work in the sandbox to give a full peer review. However, the information that is on the sandbox page is heading in the right direction for the article. I believe that starting this way will allow for readers to know what the article is supposed to be about and what it MBSR actually is. There are no references in the bibliography page, moving forward you could add some valid references to back up the information that you are editing into the article. Since you have a topic of something that is more so of a practice than a disorder, you could add references that show evidence based data. While you continue to edit, you should fact check the information to make sure that it is accurate.