User:Angela Apple/Multiple jeopardy/Ashemmasmith Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angela Apple


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Angela Apple/Multiple jeopardy
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Multiple jeopardy
 * Multiple jeopardy

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead was not edited, but a body paragraph was edited. It was well edited and cited well. The information that was provided to help back up the writing was well sourced. I would like to see how you can expand on the topic of Matrix of Domination. The rest of the article is well written and well sourced, but there are some other areas where it can be expanded more.