User:Angela Apple/Multiple jeopardy/Joshua646 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Angela Apple


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angela%20Apple/Multiple_jeopardy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Multiple jeopardy

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I feel like more information should be added.

The information added did not really go into depth of the topic, leaves readers like myself with more questions. But, it is a good start.