User:Angela Apple/Multiple jeopardy/YossTur Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Angela Apple)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Angela Apple/Multiple jeopardy


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Angela Apple/Multiple jeopardy

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

the information that is provided is very easy to understand, it is clear. I would have like to have seen a little more expansion on the topic, perhaps including the topic of single identity or how that inequalities are all discriminated equally.