User:Angelah24/Early pregnancy bleeding/Shwetaamyychawla Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelah24

Taylorrh

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Early pregnancy bleeding
 * Early pregnancy bleeding

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has been updated to incorporate new content, as the words "women" have been changed to "pregnant people" which is more inclusive. The introductory sentence is informative and describes what the article is about, and does not have information not seen in other parts of the article.

Content added is both relevant and up to date (as of one week); it does not consider the populations that are at most risk for early pregnancy bleeding so this may be added in.

The content added is neutral, backed up by other opinions. The sources added were also thorough and written with the diverse experiences of the medical students editing the article. All the links I checked worked!

I appreciated how much more inclusive the article became with the edits made - overall the quality has been improved! As further medical techniques to treat and understandings of early pregnancy bleeding are discovered, the article can be improved.