User:Angelina3000/Four-Faceted Model of Accelerating Leadership Identity/ChrisDeClou Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000, Robertcarcara, ManuelValeroUCF, Dramnarine0123, Dominic D928, JAcosta2002, Sa945509


 * Link to draft you're reviewingpart fot he
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Four-Faceted_Model_of_Accelerating_Leadership_Identity?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Since is early within the assignment, it is hard to do a thorough evaluation. However, I will do my best. Right now, your article has a lead,but no substance yet. There is only one sentence so far, which is a basic definition of what the Four-Faceted Model of Accelerating Leadership Identity is. Now because it is in the "lead" section of the article, in order to improve it I would have added more to make it a full on introduction as to what the theory is. The definition does an okay job, but there should be more behind it so that the reader understands what they are getting into. Also, how will you guys break up your information as a group ? I also see you do have your lead definition cited. That is a good start. Make sure to have every bit of information you use cited so that you can avoid plagiarism.