User:Angelina3000/Four-Faceted Model of Accelerating Leadership Identity/Gaby340 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angelina3000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelina3000/Four-Faceted_Model_of_Accelerating_Leadership_Identity?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Since its the first week that we are working on the actual information there is not a lot to work with. But I do see one sentence of the Four Faceted Model it is good to bring in the goals/functions but to begin it may be better to do a definition. Let the readers know what they will be learning about prior to reading the entire article. As well as making sure to break it down into a balanced format may be helpful for the entire group to break down information faster. Some other notes is to make sure everyone is following the same formatting style, photos and key terms are important for readers.